for To Tara and Cassie10/5/2006 c1 
1LadyBlackbird
lol... I have a friend like that... I totally get where you're coming from. I like the format of the poem, especially the lines "that you never will achieve/instead you paint this pretty portrait/that only you conceive/that only you can see/that only you deceive" The emotions are strong, too. Good job.
x. Lady Blackbird .x
1LadyBlackbirdlol... I have a friend like that... I totally get where you're coming from. I like the format of the poem, especially the lines "that you never will achieve/instead you paint this pretty portrait/that only you conceive/that only you can see/that only you deceive" The emotions are strong, too. Good job.
x. Lady Blackbird .x
9/20/2003 c1 46inquistrix
been there...i like your work better when it's in free verse, your emotion spills out a little more, y'know?
check my stuff out if you've got the time
iNzaNiTi
46inquistrixbeen there...i like your work better when it's in free verse, your emotion spills out a little more, y'know?
check my stuff out if you've got the time
iNzaNiTi