
12/19/2001 c1
8Snowshoe Hare
You seem to have a vaxing habit of not continuing your stories very far past the first chapter. To make the torment even worse, your writing is intriguing and entrancing. I would peald with the rest for more, but I know how long it takes to write things, and so won't bother to guilt you.

You seem to have a vaxing habit of not continuing your stories very far past the first chapter. To make the torment even worse, your writing is intriguing and entrancing. I would peald with the rest for more, but I know how long it takes to write things, and so won't bother to guilt you.
9/20/2001 c1
11ArwenAria18
It ends there? Say it isn't so! I want more, please pretty! Who exactly is it that she sees? And why cannot her family see him? This was so nicely written, and I want more! Immediately, if possible. Please? Won't you? -ArwenAria18

It ends there? Say it isn't so! I want more, please pretty! Who exactly is it that she sees? And why cannot her family see him? This was so nicely written, and I want more! Immediately, if possible. Please? Won't you? -ArwenAria18
9/18/2001 c1
3Kara Angelle
whoa! that is creepy, spooky even... I've never heard a ghost storie told as well... again your work is good even if not what I expected from the summary...

whoa! that is creepy, spooky even... I've never heard a ghost storie told as well... again your work is good even if not what I expected from the summary...
9/17/2001 c1 Boston
More please!
More please!
9/17/2001 c1
17ArwenStar914
Hmmm, this is interesting... that's the only way I can put it. Well written, and mysterious. I can't describe it, but it's good. =) **ArwenStar**

Hmmm, this is interesting... that's the only way I can put it. Well written, and mysterious. I can't describe it, but it's good. =) **ArwenStar**