for Civilian Paranormal, Inc9/19/2002 c1 
16Ives
Attention getting. Thought provoking. It is amazing how much you can get a feel for somebody based on only the way you've written them talking.
16IvesAttention getting. Thought provoking. It is amazing how much you can get a feel for somebody based on only the way you've written them talking.
9/18/2001 c1 1Martin Silenus
You really got something here and I encourage you to keep going with it. This beginning is dark and sketchy, but it definatly captures attention. Just keep doing what you're doing and this project will turn out great.
1Martin SilenusYou really got something here and I encourage you to keep going with it. This beginning is dark and sketchy, but it definatly captures attention. Just keep doing what you're doing and this project will turn out great.