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9/2/2017 c1 AnimeLover321
So good!
12/12/2016 c1 CrimsonClover26
I love this story it's so different than all the others I like how you've really gone out there and even though it's not one would call a fully functioning relationship between the two I think it really worksorry. I was so sad when I got a new phone because I realised I hadn't put it in my favs and I'd forgotten what it was called but I remembered pheonix I'm glad I put it in my favs this time please don't stop writing your really good x
12/9/2016 c20 HouseOfJack
The collar chain with Phoenix went to far in my opinion.
12/9/2016 c19 HouseOfJack
Despite the fact no one would go against Aether I still think someone should've said something, anything really, about how things have been going on.
12/9/2016 c15 HouseOfJack
I hope that you cut him some slack eventually.
9/17/2016 c10 Shiina
Oh my god! This is so fucked up! Why would you make Phoenix attracted to someone who hurt him like that and treats him like a dog?! I thought Phoenix was better than this, I'm so disappointed...
I don't think I'll be countinuing, I get so effing mad, it's not good for my health.
9/17/2016 c8 Shiina
Why is Phoenix comparing love to ownership?! You don't own someone you love like Aether seem to think!
9/17/2016 c7 Shiina
I personally think the skimpy outfits are completely unnecessary. My second hand embarassement/discomfort is distracting me from what's going on. Can't concentrate.
My theory so far is that the Principal is evil and that the Sacrifices are made to 'vanish' but are actually killed in a some evil sacrifice to grant the Principal immortality... or something like that... Am I totally wrong? Ahahah
9/17/2016 c4 Shiina
Well Phoenix and Aether's relationship is domestic abuse in the making. I mean Aether obviously wants Phoenix but he fucking cut him with a fucking katana, what does that say about him?
And kids being treated as property as an actual rule?! Jesus... I mean they are called 'scarifices' like they're actually things to be used and not people. I'm just as outraged as Phoenix. I can't stand when adults, in stories where the MCs are kids, condone violence, bullying and abuse; let the kids get hurt like it's no big deal when they could and should be preventing it.
7/24/2015 c15 Guest
*pfft*. . . "Throbbing genitals",

That sounds real sexy.
6/3/2015 c72 Guest
Here comes the hateful anon.

All I can say is : this chapter is so gross. Make up and make out is that what this chapter is ? I thought there will be a complicated problem solving thingy. Heh, typical.
6/3/2015 c71 Guest
I thought that this fiction will be a little rational. Eventhough it's a 'fiction'. The word Masochist made me laugh, really. Some twisted plot where the stud is s and twinks is m ? It's not even funny, you knew no human would take pleasure from pain. Even if there is, they just want to look cool and different from other people. I was expecting phoenix to have a change of personality after that forty-what incident. And their relationship, it's a cycle. I'm kinda getting bored. Gore then sex gore sex gore sex gore sex. I don't even see 'romance'.

Eventhough Phoenix is a Divine being, he WAS a human before. He understood pain, and the cause of it. Aether abused him but he kept his character so well it's not even normal, even if he crave another affection, he should have denied it not deny-then-accept-and-deny it. What I mean Deny is Deny. Like how you would deny if someone told you to kill your mother.

I don't mind if this story ending would be bad or cliffhanger but, you seriously have to change their personality. Someone just can't stand being physically abused over and over again, and to retain their mind! That's really not normal. That's all.

I like the story plot exclude too much blood. The writer here gotta pity phoenix more by making him lose his mind and just suicide himself. By that, Aether would feel eternal anguish by what he had caused. I love this kind of ending, making a certain someone felt guilty.
6/1/2015 c45 Guest
I do not like the overly gore of each chapter. By logic, phoenix would have died many times by blood loss.
3/15/2015 c72 Kagomay
This story is bad for my health but I can't help but re-read it. Is it gonna be completed?
12/29/2013 c72 Kan
You should complete what you start...or its all in vain
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