for Pathfinder9/20/2001 c1 Jemz
Wow...that's so good! **applauds**
The paragraph with her father crying is just so sad. :*(
Wow...that's so good! **applauds**
The paragraph with her father crying is just so sad. :*(
9/20/2001 c1 
1wishicouldwrite
i like it. and i think that you should write more. i feel the same way about my story..tryign to work out if i should write more! i do write things, just not got around to posting them yet.
your story was good, imagintive! though i think i might have been a bit better if it didnt move along so quickley, if there was a bit more to the story. but its ok
1wishicouldwritei like it. and i think that you should write more. i feel the same way about my story..tryign to work out if i should write more! i do write things, just not got around to posting them yet.
your story was good, imagintive! though i think i might have been a bit better if it didnt move along so quickley, if there was a bit more to the story. but its ok