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6/1/2006 c1 24Thomas Maplewood
Really cool. I like the fact it's all in computer type languge, but put in a few more symbols, like /:|''|\/| things like that, it'll make it better i think. Still, awesome. Favorite stores for sure.
3/14/2002 c4 10Anumati
VERY NICE! As long as you don't overdo Eric's strength and give him enough faults to be human, this is shaping up to be a great story. I'll keep an eye on this one :)
12/15/2001 c3 2puppie
wow great plot cant think of much rong with it, left me in susuoense, hope to hear of more chapter just as good as the first ones
9/25/2001 c2 21Lamie
oooh. you gotta finish this! i am interested now.. mm-hmm! i think i like this story because it has something that normal people can relate to. mm-hmm!
9/25/2001 c1 Lamie
mm-hmm... this is the 7th story ive come across today, but the first that i wasn't immedeatly bored by.
9/24/2001 c2 Mina Rose
Very interesting!

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