Reviews: Runaway | FictionPress

11/6/2003 c1

21Shade2
I was expecting something a little more Rincewindish (you did say you liked Terry Pratchett in your profile), but this is much better than that. Truly wonderful use of words.

2/15/2002 c1

119Silent Dreamer
one word... wow.

2/4/2002 c1

26sweetspontaneous
really cool...amazing imagery and rhythm...love the line -to tear your face off of me-

12/9/2001 c1 89167
Wow. That was wonderful. It isn't as depressing as I thought it would be. Certainly a change from the really depressing stuff I read and write.

10/1/2001 c1

1AXII
Feelin' Blue,

Feelin Down,

Don' Know when,

I'll be up and around,

Again.

^.^

9/20/2001 c1

3Glyn
I like this one a lot. Sort of a combo of hope and hopelessness. Very cool. Good imagery too, especially the last 4 lines.