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9/8/2005 c1 4Illigitimate Luv Child
Wow, very original setting out, I read it both ways and it's excellent, both times. I like it, nice work

Your friendly neighbourhood Luv Child
8/20/2005 c1 31Raptis Chou Reev
Thus is the cycle
3/2/2005 c1 16Wing Chant
Good work! =D I like the way you wrote this poem. It makes it an interesting read. I also like the meaning of the poem. Very concise! ^^

loserz. ;)
8/30/2003 c1 18hauntedshryne
WOw, thats wicked cool that it makes totally perfect sense weather you read it straight across or up and down...amazing, really intelligent piece of work, oh, and thank you for the review on Uncertainty, twas muy coolness

^_^
3/3/2003 c1 4Renee the Rabid Squirrel
I read through it column-wise and row-wise. very nice work, I really love what you did with this.
11/9/2002 c1 31Rizka
interesting way of putting it together...and it makes some sense either way...gewd...

~me
11/9/2002 c1 7Shelti M
Okay, I don't understand the whole "philosophy of life" thing, but it's a beautiful poem. It actually created a sort of picture in my head. It kind of reminds me of a tapestry I once saw...
11/8/2002 c1 12Dawn I. Cambridge
No, it's too deep for me to understand... I love the way you wrote it though...
10/25/2002 c1 24Lux's Confusion
hmmm can't figure it out but definently interesting. to my its thoughts put into a poem which i really like...

-Jasmine
7/19/2002 c1 29Katterree Fengari
oooooo...I love the format...and the poem, nope, I don't really get it either
7/19/2002 c1 Naeginnie6 not logged in
Hmm... i think that was really... weird. and strange... and... funny!
6/12/2002 c1 34Sparkles-Chan
Love it. Don't "get it", but love it.
4/28/2002 c1 122Mistress Jakira
For the most part I can't say much new about this that hasn't already been said (after all, there have been 29 reviews before me! SHEESH! lol), but I'd have to agree with Cindi and Mephisto most.

The way I saw it, it wasn't really supposed to necessarily "make sense"-but it gave me this haunting echo-y feeling. *laughs* Sort of like "Green Bird" off the second Cowboy Bebop OST (don't ask-you don't know what you'd be getting into if you did ^_~). I think it got the meaning across right-especially with the title. It captures a feeling with a myriad of different words and phrases-each in unique ways, depending on which way you read the poem (I read it all three ways)-that can't be described with words. You're describing the indescribable, sort of. Okay okay okay, I'm gonna stop now, because I am not making any sense at all, but that's what I have to say (this from the person who said "I can't say much that hasn't already been said..."). It's excellent work, really. :) Another mesmerizing poem. ^_^ ~MJ
4/24/2002 c1 jewls13
I like this a lot. I've always wanted to attempt something like that, this format, but it was never the right piece. This worked very well,
4/23/2002 c1 21Dryad
i really like this one, its really good.
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