
4/3/2002 c1
1UntalkativeBunny
Very interesting.I had to read it for the second time to understand.. I liked the way the two verses create one that is not complete. The title is also appealing.. This is also a good example of autobiographicael poetry.And still I'm just used to saying-good chances are that your mum is better than mine.

Very interesting.I had to read it for the second time to understand.. I liked the way the two verses create one that is not complete. The title is also appealing.. This is also a good example of autobiographicael poetry.And still I'm just used to saying-good chances are that your mum is better than mine.
3/29/2002 c1
50Kittioto
Hmm... wasn't expecting that! Your Mom? Sad... my mom and I have fights every once in a while... which is.. sad... because mom and I are like best friends. ~Sweatdrops~ Though last night we fought with each other... ~shakes head distastefully~ Anyway, lovely poem... really brings out the sadness of being loved, and hated, all at the same time. Goodness. ^_^

Hmm... wasn't expecting that! Your Mom? Sad... my mom and I have fights every once in a while... which is.. sad... because mom and I are like best friends. ~Sweatdrops~ Though last night we fought with each other... ~shakes head distastefully~ Anyway, lovely poem... really brings out the sadness of being loved, and hated, all at the same time. Goodness. ^_^