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9/16/2006 c1 8Marie Northcott
This piece was amazing. I truly must say that you have a real talent for description where many people lack. Your use of the elements to describe and fill out your story of creation was extremely well done, and I think the fact that you so successfully added such tangible characterisitcs to your Gods in the story made it very smooth and understandable. I found this piece well-balanced and easy to follow. That is very hard to accomplish when you are designing a story that has so many unknown and uninvented aspects to it. You managed to make this piece very beautiful and scriptural. I love it.

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