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2/16/2006 c1 20twilightrunner
Sometimes it's little random poems we write that turn out the best. I love it, especially the end. "I'm screaming in silence, when I lose, I win. The line is just too thin..." I know exactly what you mean there.
11/4/2002 c1 119Silent Dreamer
thin lines aren't easy to walk on and when you can they're not so easy to stay on. i walk the thin line between it everyday but i never get to the end. good poem.
1/19/2002 c1 32Mackenzie Anderson
im getting over an eating disorder as well (in case you cant tell..) this is a great poem.. it's so true ..
1/7/2002 c1 23Lornyl Mahtsae
, oops, said la and li too much... U should try it some time, it's great! I say Psyco like it's a good thing? RIGHT! Please Review me! I'm happy. But I'm not always like this... I love your name! And I love this poem...It's very true to all...
12/1/2001 c1 10jitterbug
Lol, Ok, Cuz i feel like it, i'm going to go around all of your stories and poems and review them, even if they've been out for a while. Ok, Good poem, sam! I guess you wrote this at a depressing point, huh? Good Job!
9/28/2001 c1 butterfly
That's exactly how i feel most of the time. I loved it!

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