for To Act Like a Warrior12/2/2004 c1 
5Zane Richardson Waya Wolf
I greatly enjoyed this story, you wrote a masterful blend of conflicting emotions, you let us the readers know how bad Silvereyes wanted to be a warrior,you let us know that he was prepared to sacrifce that to save his friend. You let us see a different side of werewolves (A side I like better than the monsters of movies and stuff) Great job, keep it up ^_^
5Zane Richardson Waya WolfI greatly enjoyed this story, you wrote a masterful blend of conflicting emotions, you let us the readers know how bad Silvereyes wanted to be a warrior,you let us know that he was prepared to sacrifce that to save his friend. You let us see a different side of werewolves (A side I like better than the monsters of movies and stuff) Great job, keep it up ^_^
7/13/2003 c1 1lone-anime
This is great! I can't believe English is your second language, yet you write incredible fics! I bow down to you. This was really good, a few spelling/grammar mistakes but nothing to run around madly for. It had a great plot, with a believable world created in a short story.
Anyway, off to read some of your others now. I loved this fic! (and i love wolves!)
^_~
1lone-animeThis is great! I can't believe English is your second language, yet you write incredible fics! I bow down to you. This was really good, a few spelling/grammar mistakes but nothing to run around madly for. It had a great plot, with a believable world created in a short story.
Anyway, off to read some of your others now. I loved this fic! (and i love wolves!)
^_~
6/13/2003 c1 Aceles
Nice job! You know you've got a good story when you find one that creates an entire believable world and society in one chapter!Nice!
Nice job! You know you've got a good story when you find one that creates an entire believable world and society in one chapter!Nice!
3/7/2003 c1 27Loganberry
Yeah well, I have no intention of running into Hawkflight's mouth, thank you very much! =;)
Considering that English isn't your native tongue (hence the occasional typos, I assume), this is very impressive. I've read an awful lot of werewolf (and were-other-things!) stories recently, and while most were competently done, this stands out in its sense of "belonging". Reading your A/N at the top, I can see why!
27LoganberryYeah well, I have no intention of running into Hawkflight's mouth, thank you very much! =;)
Considering that English isn't your native tongue (hence the occasional typos, I assume), this is very impressive. I've read an awful lot of werewolf (and were-other-things!) stories recently, and while most were competently done, this stands out in its sense of "belonging". Reading your A/N at the top, I can see why!
12/19/2001 c1 3KirjavaLyra
This is a really good story! But aren't werewolves part human? Will they have to change back again?
3KirjavaLyraThis is a really good story! But aren't werewolves part human? Will they have to change back again?
10/24/2001 c1 KittenGirl555
*makes a face* I absolutely hate you. English is your second language (you're Swedish, right?) and yet you STILL write better fiction than I do. The only thing I could possibly consider bad is you have a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but that isn't the end of the world...The pacing is great (it speeds through the battle scenes, but slows down for descriptions), the romance isn't cheesy enough to make a sandwich out of (LOL), and the plot is pretty good-I didn't really expect Silvereyes to get to be a warrior after all. To sum this up (and quit borin' ya!), this is a great story, and therefore I must hate you for it ^^
*makes a face* I absolutely hate you. English is your second language (you're Swedish, right?) and yet you STILL write better fiction than I do. The only thing I could possibly consider bad is you have a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but that isn't the end of the world...The pacing is great (it speeds through the battle scenes, but slows down for descriptions), the romance isn't cheesy enough to make a sandwich out of (LOL), and the plot is pretty good-I didn't really expect Silvereyes to get to be a warrior after all. To sum this up (and quit borin' ya!), this is a great story, and therefore I must hate you for it ^^
11/28/2000 c1 Ly the werewolf
Wow! It's really nice to see other members of my kind getting along and acting so well like that! You're a great author!
Wow! It's really nice to see other members of my kind getting along and acting so well like that! You're a great author!