for Beaten6/11/2005 c1 DW
It was interesting
It was interesting
10/20/2003 c1 
3shamless hate
I stand her?
*doing Dr. evil impression* Oh, HerE. HerE HerE
otherwise i loved it
3shamless hateI stand her?
*doing Dr. evil impression* Oh, HerE. HerE HerE
otherwise i loved it
6/29/2003 c1 98Braddhadair
~pain can show the best of some people's abilities it seems. it has alot of stong feelings in it; the pain from your father; the pain from your own self after a long period of time.
wonderful job, it even sent chills up my spine.~
98Braddhadair~pain can show the best of some people's abilities it seems. it has alot of stong feelings in it; the pain from your father; the pain from your own self after a long period of time.
wonderful job, it even sent chills up my spine.~
2/10/2003 c1 BDM of Bristow
[quote="JH"]If you’re going to leave a stupid note, forget it. I know this is weird. It is not a product of chemicals or alcohol. It is just a little something i threw together at midnight. I am tired and I am a person who likes pain with my pleasure so...Keep your stupid ass comments to yourself. Peace, love and serenity in the hands of God, Raveyn.[/quote]
STUPID NOTE STUPID NOTE STUPID NOTE! Lol
[quote="JH"]If you’re going to leave a stupid note, forget it. I know this is weird. It is not a product of chemicals or alcohol. It is just a little something i threw together at midnight. I am tired and I am a person who likes pain with my pleasure so...Keep your stupid ass comments to yourself. Peace, love and serenity in the hands of God, Raveyn.[/quote]
STUPID NOTE STUPID NOTE STUPID NOTE! Lol
5/23/2002 c1 15LevinSerra
Excellent piece... I like the way you put a single word to exemplify the next paragraph... Interesting idea... Any thoughts of building on this world (with an cruel power-hungry ruler) or characters (the insane daughter of said ruler leads revolt)? Anyway, good work...
15LevinSerraExcellent piece... I like the way you put a single word to exemplify the next paragraph... Interesting idea... Any thoughts of building on this world (with an cruel power-hungry ruler) or characters (the insane daughter of said ruler leads revolt)? Anyway, good work...
9/30/2001 c1 critic
Personally I think childrens are the most open minds, thay're untouches, not yet biast and completely unaware of the line dividing between good and bad
Personally I think childrens are the most open minds, thay're untouches, not yet biast and completely unaware of the line dividing between good and bad
9/29/2001 c1 3Thessily Thessilonikki
YES! I LOVE IT! THAT'S COOL! *starts talking like Mr. Jacobs* And... everything you write is the product of, not a chemical or alcohol, but a friendly white powder called CRACK. And you SMOKE it. DON'T do STUPID things. Bye now.
3Thessily ThessilonikkiYES! I LOVE IT! THAT'S COOL! *starts talking like Mr. Jacobs* And... everything you write is the product of, not a chemical or alcohol, but a friendly white powder called CRACK. And you SMOKE it. DON'T do STUPID things. Bye now.