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11Clela
Emotions came through loud and clear and the song were used well...very over-the-top though.
11ClelaEmotions came through loud and clear and the song were used well...very over-the-top though.
6/13/2004 c1 22fanigoes2hollywood
that wos imense!i love it so muhc i havent read ur other stuff but im sure its just as gd even tho it is different
22fanigoes2hollywoodthat wos imense!i love it so muhc i havent read ur other stuff but im sure its just as gd even tho it is different
2/11/2004 c1 5amaryllis
Whoa...this is so good...
I wish I could write like this...
You're going on my faves list.
5amaryllisWhoa...this is so good...
I wish I could write like this...
You're going on my faves list.
11/12/2003 c1 Toondra
that was a really good piece of writing. I've written stuff that involves some of the same type of things, but not like that. My friends all think its' really creepy, but w/e. You should check out my stuff if you ever have time.
Good writing!
that was a really good piece of writing. I've written stuff that involves some of the same type of things, but not like that. My friends all think its' really creepy, but w/e. You should check out my stuff if you ever have time.
Good writing!
6/19/2003 c1 TryAndLive
Thats story really makes you think about everything that goes on in this world! It was very well written! Keep writing, your great at it.
Thats story really makes you think about everything that goes on in this world! It was very well written! Keep writing, your great at it.
6/8/2003 c1 20Jinxie Otherside
That was unbelievable, you wrote that out so beautifully! It even made me cry!
20Jinxie OthersideThat was unbelievable, you wrote that out so beautifully! It even made me cry!
3/19/2003 c1 5eien-no-starlight
Oh, that was a very good story. I have one similar to it on fanfiction.net. Your story gave me chills. Keep writing!
P.S. Good song choice... I love Linkin Park ^.^
5eien-no-starlightOh, that was a very good story. I have one similar to it on fanfiction.net. Your story gave me chills. Keep writing!
P.S. Good song choice... I love Linkin Park ^.^
2/23/2002 c1 6Captain Cornflake
dude, i was crying man, that was sooooooo good, apart from all the dark themes n stuff, i was really entertained by this, keep writing...T_T Sai'
6Captain Cornflakedude, i was crying man, that was sooooooo good, apart from all the dark themes n stuff, i was really entertained by this, keep writing...T_T Sai'
10/1/2001 c1 32Mackenzie Anderson
wow... very emotional and well-written. (sry i dont like reviewing; im lazy)
32Mackenzie Andersonwow... very emotional and well-written. (sry i dont like reviewing; im lazy)
9/30/2001 c1 Anime X
That... was... scary... Jenny I think you're gonna give me and everyone esle nightmares *points behind her where Duo is clinging to a pillow, Jargon is hiding behind a teddy bear and all 29 Winner sisters have fainted* uh hu...
That... was... scary... Jenny I think you're gonna give me and everyone esle nightmares *points behind her where Duo is clinging to a pillow, Jargon is hiding behind a teddy bear and all 29 Winner sisters have fainted* uh hu...