for Underworld5/4/2002 c1 QueenAmbi
How sad...
I really liked it though. How you described everything.
How sad...
I really liked it though. How you described everything.
5/3/2002 c1 Poetry in Despair
Oh, sad :( really good though. very well written. too bad there isn;t more.
Oh, sad :( really good though. very well written. too bad there isn;t more.
5/3/2002 c1 
1Becca Lynn
wow... this is just an AMAZING story... i'm such a sucker for impossible romance... but this is beautiful... even for how dark it is... wow... that's the onliy thing i can really say to this... it's just absolutely amazing... the way you've captured the emotion of the two characters is great... i wish i could write like that... if you ever get the chance, go check out my story... my Pen Name is Becca Lynn... the story is not titled, so it's called "Untitled as of yet..." no one's read it or anything yet... but that's cuz i'm new to fanfic... i hope... okay... keep up the good work... i really like this... byeeeee
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1Becca Lynnwow... this is just an AMAZING story... i'm such a sucker for impossible romance... but this is beautiful... even for how dark it is... wow... that's the onliy thing i can really say to this... it's just absolutely amazing... the way you've captured the emotion of the two characters is great... i wish i could write like that... if you ever get the chance, go check out my story... my Pen Name is Becca Lynn... the story is not titled, so it's called "Untitled as of yet..." no one's read it or anything yet... but that's cuz i'm new to fanfic... i hope... okay... keep up the good work... i really like this... byeeeee
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5/2/2002 c1 6Meitora
Wow. I'm really touched. I adore your description... it's just incredible. Congratulations. aroo!
6MeitoraWow. I'm really touched. I adore your description... it's just incredible. Congratulations. aroo!
4/13/2002 c1 Starglass
oh.
oh oh.
oh oh oh.
;_;
make me feel like a worthless writer, please!
mega-meh
that is incredibly moving
*sighs deeply*
*taps fingers*
aww... just... magically written. beautiful. and... ;_;
oh.
oh oh.
oh oh oh.
;_;
make me feel like a worthless writer, please!
mega-meh
that is incredibly moving
*sighs deeply*
*taps fingers*
aww... just... magically written. beautiful. and... ;_;
4/5/2002 c1 Kalikimaka
That...was...beautiful. I am going to throw away all my notebooks, hide under my bed until next Thursday, and emerge as an artist or something which does not involve writing; that was sooo good.
That...was...beautiful. I am going to throw away all my notebooks, hide under my bed until next Thursday, and emerge as an artist or something which does not involve writing; that was sooo good.
12/31/2001 c1 5MeltingSilver
This is a beautiful story of light and dark joining together. It's extremely well written, flowing, gripping, descriptive. I could hardly pull myself away from it. Write much more like it.
5MeltingSilverThis is a beautiful story of light and dark joining together. It's extremely well written, flowing, gripping, descriptive. I could hardly pull myself away from it. Write much more like it.
11/20/2001 c1 Kagome
wow! that first chapter was excellent. please write more-i love your style of writing.
wow! that first chapter was excellent. please write more-i love your style of writing.
10/30/2001 c1 Kristen
Bloody excellent! I don't know what else to put, it was an absolutely fantastic story and I really really enjoyed reading it!
Bloody excellent! I don't know what else to put, it was an absolutely fantastic story and I really really enjoyed reading it!
10/2/2001 c1 Wiegraf Folles
Enchanting- that's the theme of this piece, is it not? The review? Well, the description of a lady's beauty is beautifully shown here, for apart from just outer beauty, you did express the importance of inner beauty as well. However, the plot is a little bare, do you not think so? - The myth of Hades and Persephone is a very complex one. In summary, it's simply Aphrodite's work. The same went for Zeus' love for Hera, as well as Poseidon's love for Amphitrite. That's for your information (I hope I'm not nitpicking!) - However, such unconditional love was shown. It's the beauty of life, and that possesses such. Good work.
Enchanting- that's the theme of this piece, is it not? The review? Well, the description of a lady's beauty is beautifully shown here, for apart from just outer beauty, you did express the importance of inner beauty as well. However, the plot is a little bare, do you not think so? - The myth of Hades and Persephone is a very complex one. In summary, it's simply Aphrodite's work. The same went for Zeus' love for Hera, as well as Poseidon's love for Amphitrite. That's for your information (I hope I'm not nitpicking!) - However, such unconditional love was shown. It's the beauty of life, and that possesses such. Good work.
9/30/2001 c1 Jenny
Yet another review from me... yes, I read all of your stories! I don't think I've missed one yet! Ummm... so, let's see here. Ya know what? You make my life hard in a good way! I have to get all of my homework done before I get on-line so I can read your stories! Yay! 2 pluses! I really love punctuation. Ok- I'm scaring myself... put up the next part please, so that you can get another insane review, from Jenny who is high on air, life, and... *gasp* caffeine!
Yet another review from me... yes, I read all of your stories! I don't think I've missed one yet! Ummm... so, let's see here. Ya know what? You make my life hard in a good way! I have to get all of my homework done before I get on-line so I can read your stories! Yay! 2 pluses! I really love punctuation. Ok- I'm scaring myself... put up the next part please, so that you can get another insane review, from Jenny who is high on air, life, and... *gasp* caffeine!