for The DI's Girl6/9/2009 c1 
1StarEyed14
I KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN! I've only read maybe three of your stories and they have been awesome.. but in the back of my head I just had an inkling that some low life would result to plagarism. SHEESH! I didn't even finish DI's girl :(
1StarEyed14I KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN! I've only read maybe three of your stories and they have been awesome.. but in the back of my head I just had an inkling that some low life would result to plagarism. SHEESH! I didn't even finish DI's girl :(
12/7/2008 c10 2Aynn
Cute story. =) I noticed that the spelling of DI Devil's name differed between the last two chapters. In 9 it was Ariel, and in the last it was Arial. That being said, Chris and Lynne were super adorable!
2AynnCute story. =) I noticed that the spelling of DI Devil's name differed between the last two chapters. In 9 it was Ariel, and in the last it was Arial. That being said, Chris and Lynne were super adorable!
6/12/2008 c1 Strangely Natural
This is great story, the raport between Lynne and Chris is so precious especially at the end of chapter 9, as is the moment when Ally tries to get over the wall. I'm glad I read this again.
This is great story, the raport between Lynne and Chris is so precious especially at the end of chapter 9, as is the moment when Ally tries to get over the wall. I'm glad I read this again.
6/11/2008 c10 Elodie Wolfe
Haha, awesome story. Gonna go read the rest of your stuff now. Oh and DI Devil is just JEALOUS, lol. :)
Middi~
Haha, awesome story. Gonna go read the rest of your stuff now. Oh and DI Devil is just JEALOUS, lol. :)
Middi~
4/12/2008 c9 Cariad
Great story I loved it.
Could have done with some spaces between each lines, but I really enjoy this story.
Great story I loved it.
Could have done with some spaces between each lines, but I really enjoy this story.
2/9/2006 c9 2Ki'alla
Its been me again, I absolutely love this story. In this story I felt like I knew the characters, it was a great plot line. LOVED IT!
2Ki'allaIts been me again, I absolutely love this story. In this story I felt like I knew the characters, it was a great plot line. LOVED IT!
6/10/2005 c9 emerald
perfect and fantastic...they are made for each other...with their stubborness and sweetness i don't think any other man or woman might be able to handle them...their chemistry is astounding...absolutely adored the story! good job on it...now go and get it published!
perfect and fantastic...they are made for each other...with their stubborness and sweetness i don't think any other man or woman might be able to handle them...their chemistry is astounding...absolutely adored the story! good job on it...now go and get it published!
8/20/2004 c9 Dawn
Wow,5-stars! Just need a bit of editing and you should send it off to a publisher!
Wow,5-stars! Just need a bit of editing and you should send it off to a publisher!
10/25/2003 c1 zagato
That was so fast! They met in a bar and now they're living together. Whew - you blew me away there.
That was so fast! They met in a bar and now they're living together. Whew - you blew me away there.
8/19/2003 c9 1Silver Scaled Dragon
That was such a good story I don't know why it doesn't have more reviews. I was a bit surprised that they'd already met I haven't read one like that before. It was unique, I liked it kind of refreshing.
1Silver Scaled DragonThat was such a good story I don't know why it doesn't have more reviews. I was a bit surprised that they'd already met I haven't read one like that before. It was unique, I liked it kind of refreshing.