12/7/2008 c5 7Cursed-Night
I do indeed wish you would continue this story.
While it ended quite well.
To learn what happens next would be even better.
I do indeed wish you would continue this story.
While it ended quite well.
To learn what happens next would be even better.
1/2/2008 c5 2erasmuss
I read this stroy and go WHOO! Then I look at the date of last update and am like...
Oh brillaint. 8 FRIKKIN YEARS AGO.
Oh well.
Too bad for me.
I read this stroy and go WHOO! Then I look at the date of last update and am like...
Oh brillaint. 8 FRIKKIN YEARS AGO.
Oh well.
Too bad for me.
12/21/2007 c5 blackrose214
Hey there. I like this story a lot and I`d be thrilled if you`d ontinue it. soon maybe? You`re doing a great job here. :D
Hey there. I like this story a lot and I`d be thrilled if you`d ontinue it. soon maybe? You`re doing a great job here. :D
6/25/2007 c5 37le roi des pirates
I'm sure you have enough reviews for this story, haha, but I think you need another one! I just wanna say that this is one of the best stories that I've read. Actually, no, that's not all I wanna say. I also want to say that you should keep writing this story. And...that's it? Hopefully this is the review that helps you post the next chapter? If you need support, it's all right here!
Please keep writing!
I'm sure you have enough reviews for this story, haha, but I think you need another one! I just wanna say that this is one of the best stories that I've read. Actually, no, that's not all I wanna say. I also want to say that you should keep writing this story. And...that's it? Hopefully this is the review that helps you post the next chapter? If you need support, it's all right here!
Please keep writing!
5/4/2007 c5 Redemmo
I am really enjoying this story - the characters have a lot of depth and are very believable.
Just a small critique - the text in your last chapter is centerized instead of left-aligned and is somewhat annoying.
I am really looking forward to the next chapter and I intend to check out your other stories as well. Keep up the great work!
~Redemmo
I am really enjoying this story - the characters have a lot of depth and are very believable.
Just a small critique - the text in your last chapter is centerized instead of left-aligned and is somewhat annoying.
I am really looking forward to the next chapter and I intend to check out your other stories as well. Keep up the great work!
~Redemmo
4/30/2007 c5 31emptyword
This is a piece of sheer, sheer beauty, flawlessly written and incredibly mysterious characters. Addicting to say the least. I am willing to risk coming across as an annoying twat and clamor for an update, however unlikely after this much time. This is much too wonderful of a story to be given up. Favorites without question.
This is a piece of sheer, sheer beauty, flawlessly written and incredibly mysterious characters. Addicting to say the least. I am willing to risk coming across as an annoying twat and clamor for an update, however unlikely after this much time. This is much too wonderful of a story to be given up. Favorites without question.
3/23/2007 c5 H.f.M
I love this story... I am sorry that it took me this long to find. Is there more?
I love this story... I am sorry that it took me this long to find. Is there more?
5/26/2005 c5 Tenn
Ohh, you've got to crank out a miraculous update now! This is the awesome! The epitome of awesomeness, or maybe cruelty, that you haven't updated.
Ohh, you've got to crank out a miraculous update now! This is the awesome! The epitome of awesomeness, or maybe cruelty, that you haven't updated.
4/15/2005 c5 23LucifersDarkChild
I stand corrected.
That was mean, and you know it.
Ah well, cant wait for the next chappie! We get it soon, right? Right? RIGHT?
I stand corrected.
That was mean, and you know it.
Ah well, cant wait for the next chappie! We get it soon, right? Right? RIGHT?
4/15/2005 c4 LucifersDarkChild
Worst, ending, ever.
Okay, yeah, I stole it from the comic book dude from The Simpsons, but ITS TRUE! T-T -tears- Its one of the worst cliffies I've read!
"worst" as in suckiness that I have to wait and read!
Worst, ending, ever.
Okay, yeah, I stole it from the comic book dude from The Simpsons, but ITS TRUE! T-T -tears- Its one of the worst cliffies I've read!
"worst" as in suckiness that I have to wait and read!
4/15/2005 c3 LucifersDarkChild
-purrs-
As I was reading this, I noticed a resmblance to my character Dino and Lucian. Dino isn't in one of my originals; well, he is and he isn't. He's going to be in a story that I'm not going to post on fp.c. No, I'm going to send it straight to the presses. Hm, still need to pick a pen name...
Anyway, Dino and Lucian are alot alike. However, Dino shows a whole lot more emotion that Lucian does, but that doesn't matter because they both rule.
-purrs-
As I was reading this, I noticed a resmblance to my character Dino and Lucian. Dino isn't in one of my originals; well, he is and he isn't. He's going to be in a story that I'm not going to post on fp.c. No, I'm going to send it straight to the presses. Hm, still need to pick a pen name...
Anyway, Dino and Lucian are alot alike. However, Dino shows a whole lot more emotion that Lucian does, but that doesn't matter because they both rule.
4/15/2005 c2 LucifersDarkChild
-more droolage-
I shouldn't even have to go on. I mean, with a review. With the story its is a definate "YES!"
-more droolage-
I shouldn't even have to go on. I mean, with a review. With the story its is a definate "YES!"