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7/24/2006 c1 3Katrina Bateman
You shouldn't hate this poem. Its really good. Kinda' depressing. But good.
7/24/2006 c1 starlight 507
im goin 2 cry its so sweet & sad but also great
12/17/2003 c1 18live2rideforever
nicely done! I love the wording!
1/1/2002 c1 48Vinsant Firepsyched
Speechless and moved.
12/1/2001 c1 10Phaere
This is a great poem... A friend of me is suicidal, too... -Shazirah
11/11/2001 c1 42Dream Angel
This is depressing... and even more so because you're not making it up. It's a good poem, though.
10/12/2001 c1 6kurama saotome
your language is simple but it has power. i like writers who arent wordy. ya know, simple words but great substance.
10/11/2001 c1 38Dragon Scar
Do you know my friend Ronnie at SBHS? that sounds so like him. Only true friends can strike the heart of other friends. Show him what not to do. tell him that you care and get past the stone layer covering everything
10/9/2001 c1 56Scarecrowqueen
Much more of this emotion and I'll cry for him. Very moving and well-written.
10/8/2001 c1 4Sasa
Whoa. I can't- whoa.
10/6/2001 c1 14Hidden Emotions
I love your poem, I have two friends in this position and it's hard to see them in such a position!

Mona

(Don't hesitate to write and show some other poems! I love poems!)
10/6/2001 c1 Bella Tragedia
Aww! Great job! I love the mixed actions going on in his life! Keep it up!
10/5/2001 c1 Ti
*sniffsniff* WAAAAAAA! *cries* good, i liked it!
10/5/2001 c1 31Josef Palestir
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I hope your friend is able to find a path in life that suits him.
10/5/2001 c1 5Lithium1
Wow. This is really awesome. I just...I don't really know...just, wow.

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