4/20/2004 c1 8Amara Ryden
i like the descriptions that you used. great job! =)

2/1/2002 c1 layne
I loved this one too! The imagery was brilliant. Keep writing :)

12/11/2001 c1 12dujourfan1
very good...i love it...you could really go somewhere with your poetry...keep it up! :0)

10/7/2001 c1 5lunaflower
Very nice..I liked this a lot. Liked the imagery, the whole feel of this poem. It very neatly sums up exactly what we are all about. btw M.Angelou has written a poem along similar lines (unfortunately I don't have it to hand so the title escapes me.) but it is basically saying 'where does all the hurt go?' etc with her concluding that that is why she writes because all the emotion we experience has to have an outlet and for her (as it is so often for us) it is in writing. (If I can dig it out I'll send you a copy if you are interested?)