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2/5/2002 c1 1Elij
Whoa! What are you saying? This is excellently written. Your characters have a lot of depth to them...they are real tangible human beings. Your writing style is also mature and fluid. What more can I say?
11/12/2001 c1 Aphrodite322
Too perfect? That'd be my guess. Your characters are so well-developed for such a short story, and the ending fits exactly. It's awesome!
10/11/2001 c1 1redflye
awww! I really liked this story! Wow! It's so good! AND sad but happy at the same time! I guess I like it so much because I can relate, but it was SOOOO AWSOME! I actually think you should write a second chapter, but that's just my opinion. Thanx for reviewing my story! This one is going on my favorites

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