for Adrenaline Rush7/18/2004 c1 
33Iridia
Good imagery. I like it. The word "pounces" seems a little too catlike for a wolf, though; and is it the quarry or the wolf that's "galloping"?
Anyhow, yeah, I get too critical sometimes. :) Keep writing.
You might try writing one about the teamwork a wolf pack uses when it hunts something down...
33IridiaGood imagery. I like it. The word "pounces" seems a little too catlike for a wolf, though; and is it the quarry or the wolf that's "galloping"?
Anyhow, yeah, I get too critical sometimes. :) Keep writing.
You might try writing one about the teamwork a wolf pack uses when it hunts something down...
1/1/2002 c1 Moonwing Lobo and Metabee
moon: kool! meta: thats sounds how you hunt, except your grey and have wings. moon: so? ... im hungry now!
moon: kool! meta: thats sounds how you hunt, except your grey and have wings. moon: so? ... im hungry now!
10/25/2001 c1 DemonWolfZero
WOW! This poem is right on the mark! And it's my favorite animal too! WOOHOO!
WOW! This poem is right on the mark! And it's my favorite animal too! WOOHOO!