for I Am From6/23/2005 c1 
120hypocrite extrodinare
woa... Your poetry is amazing... simply amazing... Could you please R&R some of my work? it would be greatly appreciated...
120hypocrite extrodinarewoa... Your poetry is amazing... simply amazing... Could you please R&R some of my work? it would be greatly appreciated...
1/5/2005 c1 36Somnia
I think this is a great improvement in your work. The imagery in this is highly original, and you time the lines well. Well done.
36SomniaI think this is a great improvement in your work. The imagery in this is highly original, and you time the lines well. Well done.
8/24/2003 c1 1Ryanna Surakame
I like this a lot... Paints very vivid pictures in my head. ^-^ I like the way you took 'the end of the beginning', something people normally overuse, and followed it up with 'and starting all over again'-that line combines so well, and makes it more your own thing. Very very cool poem.
1Ryanna SurakameI like this a lot... Paints very vivid pictures in my head. ^-^ I like the way you took 'the end of the beginning', something people normally overuse, and followed it up with 'and starting all over again'-that line combines so well, and makes it more your own thing. Very very cool poem.
4/3/2002 c1 1UntalkativeBunny
First of all,I'm a sucker for poetry in first person..:)The structure is beautiful. I also believe it's truthful-I believe you stand proudly for what you write. I say it's WELL DONE xxx.
1UntalkativeBunnyFirst of all,I'm a sucker for poetry in first person..:)The structure is beautiful. I also believe it's truthful-I believe you stand proudly for what you write. I say it's WELL DONE xxx.