for Into the Void12/31/2007 c1 
5insomniac junkie
lol claustrophobic much? I love the vagueness of it, leaving the reader uncertain as to your whereabouts until the end. Good job.
5insomniac junkielol claustrophobic much? I love the vagueness of it, leaving the reader uncertain as to your whereabouts until the end. Good job.
5/20/2002 c1 AVA of GFF
thats actually quite good, the end is quite humourous, well at leats to me it is. You have some great skill, just keep working with it.
I curse myself for accepted that
accepted should be accepting
later.
ava of GFF
(pm me)
thats actually quite good, the end is quite humourous, well at leats to me it is. You have some great skill, just keep working with it.
I curse myself for accepted that
accepted should be accepting
later.
ava of GFF
(pm me)
12/5/2001 c1 geombear
rotf! that's funny!
btw, "breath" =/= "breathe" :)
rotf! that's funny!
btw, "breath" =/= "breathe" :)
11/9/2001 c1 CorvidQueen
Oh my god, lol. I'm a dork and a half because that's EXACTLY what I go through, EVERY single time I go to those damn water parks! Why can't they just have open air tubes? Anywho, very amusing, I would have never guessed it was a water ride.
Oh my god, lol. I'm a dork and a half because that's EXACTLY what I go through, EVERY single time I go to those damn water parks! Why can't they just have open air tubes? Anywho, very amusing, I would have never guessed it was a water ride.
10/21/2001 c1 2MidnightSons
cool. ending was different and took a different look the horror genre. keep up the good work.
2MidnightSonscool. ending was different and took a different look the horror genre. keep up the good work.
10/21/2001 c1 JohnnyRotten
Didn't see that one coming. Not bad at all.
Didn't see that one coming. Not bad at all.