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1/20/2009 c11 17Divine-Citadel
OMG. Allisana as a guy. This ought to be interesting...

Nice story so far, pity you haven't updated for a really long time! I really hope you don't abandon this masterpiece!

(I'd type more but I don't want the teacher to catch me not doing my work)

~Divine-Citadel
6/4/2005 c1 Aaryn
update soon... PLEASE it's a realy good story and I see no faults... Continue.
3/15/2004 c1 iryn
well its good, i like it, it really means to me about us.
1/9/2004 c11 midnightcrow
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A guy.
OMG.
You suddenly fulfilled all my writing fantasies...I had this OriSto idea where the girl meets the guy version of herself...
Ahehehehe XD
10/19/2003 c11 10DeathStorm
Dude, mesa no like the teacher dude Mesa'd probably kill myself if mesa had a teacher like him! Yuck! ANYways, very interesting! The dad's the protecter! And hesa just doesn't know it! ...And the new Alli is a DUDE? ...Is hesa bishonen? ^^ Just curious! Love how the story's going so far, yousa can't figure out a thing its so unpredictable!

YLG,

DS
10/5/2003 c11 38Chavi West-Wind
wow... lucky i actually went to this to check for an update... i can't believe there's a male Allisana! XD hahaha! i wonder what HIS name is? i wonder who Belle is, i mean, who she is in Alli's world... like Ursus was Sam (i think...? i can't really remember) so who's Belle? Stella? o.o yes i'm being strange... not enough sleep, i'm afraid XD whoo, i'm hyper... please update soon!
9/9/2003 c11 Riisha
WAH! You updated! You should've seen my so SHOCKED because I was checking my other email and going "huh? i haven't updat4ed yet, why do I have email?" then I saw it was an author alert XP

OKAY *cough* I accidentally saw the last line and freaked.. now to read the rest of it XDD!

I miss Sir Vlad...

Uh Is Alli facing a NAKED guy right now? O_O Oh poor her and him...
9/8/2003 c11 2NthNinth
this is a really good story, please continue!
1/21/2003 c10 Allisana
Why have I taken forever? Because I'm insanely slow. (Bonk me, quickly.) Before I can delay any more, let me shoot of a quick review.

A dramatic conclusion to Lisa's story. *Finally* we find out why Lisa didn't want to go back to her world, despite being a "favored one". I cannot believe Amita got so twisted in that world. First she got married to that awful king, and then she's ready to take her niece away from her own sister! Though I do think that Amita is just feeling a bit lonely considering her isolation from the people, I still don't think it justifies her actions. It must've been fated that Lisa was taken to Alli's world at that precise moment. Maybe it's Lisa's world and king that they have to contend with.

But then again, there's still not much given about Alice's and Alyssa's world. What *is* given is not as magically threatening as Lisa's world. Hmm. I wonder if their worlds will intertwine with the main story as well. And when is the next Allisana coming? ::poke poke:: Alli, go to sleep! I want to see the next one! Maybe it'll be an Evil version. ^_~

On the ring, revelations again! And mysterious guy is back! Woo! It's been a while. Why is it that Sam's entrance is suspiciously in time with mystery guy running while looking at Alli in concern? Although you could be tricking us and Sam could actually be the one who's the Evil One. Right now, after the old woman's entrance and her warning about something lurking behind *his smile* (Sam was cheerfully smiling just paragraphs before), it does seem like there is something darker to Sam. And he *was* conveniently there when Alli woke up and the ring's power was stolen. ::also notes Sam's father being dead:: Odd and seemingly important fact! I firmly believe Sam is tied in this somewhere. But where? And who the heck is that old woman and why would Silvano care? Gah. ::boggles::

Love Fruits Basket. And I agree, Lisa in this chapter does seem a lot like sweet Tohru.
1/16/2003 c10 10DeathStorm
OOOOOOOOOOO THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOO COOL! ^^ Sorry, just hyper right now. It really is great! Mesa love a story that draws mesa in and keeps me there! PLEASE come out with a new chapter soon! Mesa wanna know what happens next! Mr. Montana is Parvus isn't hesa? ...No...that can't be right...anyways, love it! Keep up the great work!

YLG,

DS
1/8/2003 c10 Jay
More? *begs* Please?
11/20/2002 c10 38Chavi West-Wind
awwwwwwwwwwwwww...blah...ARGH! TOO MANY CLIFFIES! i know i didn't review all the others...i just started reading this a few days ago...and just now finished reading it...anyways really good...i like lisa..she sounds like me ^_^ actually maybe i'm more like alli...oh well!it's still good...have fun writing more updates ^_^ cyas!

=^.^= Cat
11/12/2002 c1 Riisha
OH yeah ... Forgot to say ...

Lisa's way of thinking is familiar to me ...

It's my Kira's philosophy ... ^.~

BYE AGAIN!
11/12/2002 c10 Riii-chan desu
Sam cool ...

Montana scary ...

Lisa cute ...

Alyssa forgiveable ...

BYE!
11/11/2002 c10 midnight
I'm starting to think your really a plotting evil, sadist who thinks of nothing but how to make a really evil cliffhanger. I love your stories (except the cliff hangers) so please continue with this one ^_^
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