8/28/2007 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Fascinating, this is truely love-lorn/love-like poetry. Heartstopping. Short, bitter, and yet bright at the same time. It shines like a star. Seriously, this was magical.
Juliet.
Fascinating, this is truely love-lorn/love-like poetry. Heartstopping. Short, bitter, and yet bright at the same time. It shines like a star. Seriously, this was magical.
Juliet.
9/18/2003 c1 1aleppine
This is beautiful. A tiny little snatch of time, balanced on the edge of a huge emotion - it's perfect for what it means.
This is beautiful. A tiny little snatch of time, balanced on the edge of a huge emotion - it's perfect for what it means.
3/1/2003 c1 141E. Gao
wow - gorgeous, in the shifting of perspectives and the display of (oh I don't know) emotion, trepidation or maybe apprehension.
~EG
wow - gorgeous, in the shifting of perspectives and the display of (oh I don't know) emotion, trepidation or maybe apprehension.
~EG
1/3/2003 c1 2aintawoman
:::gasps for breath:::
astounding really. you remind me of all of teh poets and poems that i've ever read and yet can't quite place because there is nothing singularly distinctive of any possible influence (some more than others, but at the same time this is so good, it doens't even matter). But this is wonderful and one of teh best poems (and i mean POEM and not the common teenage mire so many of us come across and even find ourselves in...) that i've read on this site. oh so very good.
:::rereads poem and smiles:::
:::gasps for breath:::
astounding really. you remind me of all of teh poets and poems that i've ever read and yet can't quite place because there is nothing singularly distinctive of any possible influence (some more than others, but at the same time this is so good, it doens't even matter). But this is wonderful and one of teh best poems (and i mean POEM and not the common teenage mire so many of us come across and even find ourselves in...) that i've read on this site. oh so very good.
:::rereads poem and smiles:::
9/10/2002 c1 252account inactive00000
oh.
wow, see, i love poetry and this is poetry. i'm not clueless about it...ack no, and believe me, you are one of the best poets on this site. i'm not trying to brownnose or anything to get you to review my work, i am honestly excited about your poem and i wanna read more and this is perfectly wonderful.
ack, beauty
oh.
wow, see, i love poetry and this is poetry. i'm not clueless about it...ack no, and believe me, you are one of the best poets on this site. i'm not trying to brownnose or anything to get you to review my work, i am honestly excited about your poem and i wanna read more and this is perfectly wonderful.
ack, beauty