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12/14/2001 c1 102RyKnOw Starfuct sic
so let me get this straight, they should read my work

cause I have a labret piercing? well whatever works

I guess. anyway's onto the poem, I like it, has a nice little

flow to it. Good use of words. and ummm yeah, I can't

think of anything else to say.

I like breathing!
11/24/2001 c1 strukdown
Unbelievable...this is amazing. I really enjoyed your poetry. your story about shanti, gatti, etc. is awesome too, but I think this poem deserves more recognition than just www.fanfiction.net...I like blueberries. Thats all I have to say. *alex*
11/15/2001 c1 Mother Mercury not signed in
Hmmm, sounds rather Creed inspired, but perhaps I'm imagining things. Me likes, but, sorry, I don't understand it either. But, I see you are naked, that's nice, isn't it? And exposed? Beautiful. You could get payed for that, you know.
11/15/2001 c1 31Quados Amundae
This thing all things devours:

Birds, beasts, trees, flowers;

Gnaws iron, bites steel;

Grinds hard stones to meal;

Slays king, ruins town,

And beats high mountain down.

Yet steals the time we share in bliss, to stay awhile, and own a kiss. Voiceless to breathe and keep the heart, this temporal rift tears us apart.

-Q'Amundae

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