for Song of the Wild9/5/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
Great work. You've created a really nice image here. I really like this poem. Keep writing.
Great work. You've created a really nice image here. I really like this poem. Keep writing.
6/26/2006 c1 
62Amalia Jagd
those last couple of lines - like a turn around for the whole poem. you dont expect it, but can get why it's in the poem. i love it!
62Amalia Jagdthose last couple of lines - like a turn around for the whole poem. you dont expect it, but can get why it's in the poem. i love it!
9/6/2005 c1 24Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt
(sighs) Good. The flow is a little off, but I think it's very good. I was going to write a Nature poem, but I keep getting caught up in a new story I''m writing... yeah.
Anyways, good job!
24Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt(sighs) Good. The flow is a little off, but I think it's very good. I was going to write a Nature poem, but I keep getting caught up in a new story I''m writing... yeah.
Anyways, good job!
4/23/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
Oh this is beautful. The rhythm makes it so soft and easy to read. Lovely...
Oh this is beautful. The rhythm makes it so soft and easy to read. Lovely...
11/11/2004 c1 99keltica
Untamed forests ... I love that ... I'm reading a great book now: The Forest in Folklore and Mythology by Alexander Porteous, it's a must for forest-lovers :D ... great imagery
keltica, the celtic fire
99kelticaUntamed forests ... I love that ... I'm reading a great book now: The Forest in Folklore and Mythology by Alexander Porteous, it's a must for forest-lovers :D ... great imagery
keltica, the celtic fire
6/18/2004 c1 21tawnyfawn
Really lovely. Everyhting just...worked. And you could totally understand everyhting, and see it. Well done.
from fawny
21tawnyfawnReally lovely. Everyhting just...worked. And you could totally understand everyhting, and see it. Well done.
from fawny
4/21/2004 c1 82Linnet
Lovely! The rhymes are natural and the images provoking. Short and sweet. =)
-Linnet
82LinnetLovely! The rhymes are natural and the images provoking. Short and sweet. =)
-Linnet
2/6/2004 c1 37eew
~ Wow! How simple, yet so emotional. I really like this light-hearted poem, it makes me want to think greatly of the world. Keep on touching hearts! Keep Writing!
c. butterfly~**
37eew~ Wow! How simple, yet so emotional. I really like this light-hearted poem, it makes me want to think greatly of the world. Keep on touching hearts! Keep Writing!
c. butterfly~**
7/29/2003 c1 Angele Raye
This is very interesting. It is unique, you've really given it life as a piece. I really enjoy the ending, it felt like it crept up on me.
~Angele Raye~
This is very interesting. It is unique, you've really given it life as a piece. I really enjoy the ending, it felt like it crept up on me.
~Angele Raye~
7/27/2003 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
Favorites list... never reviewed.
Bah...
Anyways, the poem is astounding. Beautiful work, I love it.
Keep writing!
47Anjeni WindsingerFavorites list... never reviewed.
Bah...
Anyways, the poem is astounding. Beautiful work, I love it.
Keep writing!