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5/27/2007 c1 wyckydgoddess
nice

:)
3/28/2002 c1 Lizzy Buttons
Good and cute, but you just make many short lines too make it look long! You should give a bit more thought-a little more. Like, "The velvety folds of night, pierced by the silver stars envelop the forests until the crimson eye of midday sky arises and seeps through to day." Coors original! Lol. Bubye,

~Buttons
2/14/2002 c1 kindred lines
**Small White Dragon** Irrion: "Lovely..." *Larrad approaches* "Back off Larrad it's my turn on the PC... MINE!" *Curls around the moniter... Larrad laughs and sits on the chair*

**Large Black Dragon** Larrad: "Very well put together" *dodges Irrion's snapping mouth and claws* "I loved it"
12/18/2001 c1 27Camille
Very, very good poem! I loved it! Great descriptions int here, I love poems with descriptions it alwyas makes it seem worthwhile. You really should write more poetry.

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