
9/28/2008 c1
11chipmunks love squirrels
i am dazzled! i loved reading your poem/song...it was incredible! good job.

i am dazzled! i loved reading your poem/song...it was incredible! good job.
4/21/2008 c1
6SerenityCc
I love it. When you did this, I'm sure it includes your feeling. The feeling of a writer as he believes is one that may make one succeed.

I love it. When you did this, I'm sure it includes your feeling. The feeling of a writer as he believes is one that may make one succeed.
12/4/2006 c1
138iliveinadreamworld
Wow! That was beautiful, it was incredibly well-written and wow, it was amazing! You're very talented!

Wow! That was beautiful, it was incredibly well-written and wow, it was amazing! You're very talented!
5/3/2006 c1 cloudsarenull
Lovely. It started out... kinda bad... but it got better. I LOVE the bridge!
Lovely. It started out... kinda bad... but it got better. I LOVE the bridge!
7/30/2004 c1 disgusted
i found your ballad predictable, sappy, unoriginal, and dull. Try using actual POETRY in a song. Be CREATIVE
i found your ballad predictable, sappy, unoriginal, and dull. Try using actual POETRY in a song. Be CREATIVE
12/19/2003 c1 Waffle
Great job!
I love it! I can see Toni Braxton singin it...lol
Great job!
I love it! I can see Toni Braxton singin it...lol
8/8/2002 c1 Schmisa
That's a beautiful song. You have an amazing talent.
Please continue to write.
~*~*~*Lisa*~*~*~
That's a beautiful song. You have an amazing talent.
Please continue to write.
~*~*~*Lisa*~*~*~