for Forget-Me-Not1/16/2002 c1 
48Daughter of the Nile
It seems like something from a movie. It is good. It was kind of weird at the beginning, but only because I looked at a paper cut I got yesterday, it was bleeding again! Weird...
Good poem.
~Daughter of the Nile~
48Daughter of the NileIt seems like something from a movie. It is good. It was kind of weird at the beginning, but only because I looked at a paper cut I got yesterday, it was bleeding again! Weird...
Good poem.
~Daughter of the Nile~
12/24/2001 c1 18Fustin Jelux
Great poem. The erratic structure does a good job of conveying the nonsensical and random firing of thoughts that occur in our heads (particularly in the head of someone like this)
18Fustin JeluxGreat poem. The erratic structure does a good job of conveying the nonsensical and random firing of thoughts that occur in our heads (particularly in the head of someone like this)
11/24/2001 c1 31Cindy Moon
not bad... i actually liked it.
Based on true experiences?
hope you get more reviews, if this is how you write all the time, i hope to see more.
31Cindy Moonnot bad... i actually liked it.
Based on true experiences?
hope you get more reviews, if this is how you write all the time, i hope to see more.