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12/2/2001 c1 Tasha
hmm...punctuation: middling to bad...frequent typos...too many fragments to be rational...and, if I remember correctly, the ferret was Miles, not Myles...whatever. If you wrote more of this stuff, you'd probably be first-class in 0:00 flat. Keep going!
11/26/2001 c1 Ella
Are we not you're friends ::sniff sniff:: c'mon, don't we get a mention? Hm? Oh yeah, you sent us a mass email telling us not to contact you cuz it could be traced, forgot about that. Um... u spelled Miles wrong, but that's okay. nice start
11/26/2001 c1 Mercury
sorry that it's soooo long

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