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10/6/2003 c1 8FinnessaWilliams
first you spelled oozing wrong.

and this poem doesn't seem finished. That last line did not make sense with the rest of your poem.

I realize that you used strong language but it seemed only for shock value. I would have used it more cleverly to weave in and out of the story.

FinnessaWilliams
11/28/2001 c1 shadow
Uh, butterfly, i know things are sorta shitty between us, but do you want to talk about this? I heard about it, and even though we had rough times and aren't really on good terms, i think maybe you could use another shoulder to cry on. Um, maybe i'll see you tomorrow and we can talk, ok? See ya.

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