for Life bitter none to rare7/11/2004 c1 Chel-fire
i really liked the candice and the reppitition of a few lines in this one. =3 nice job darlin -smooches-
i really liked the candice and the reppitition of a few lines in this one. =3 nice job darlin -smooches-
12/24/2001 c1 
2CrimsonFire
Eek~ poor ... dying person ... nice beat you have going there- well- I g2g read and review some more of your brilliant work so ~ JA! ~CrimsonFire
2CrimsonFireEek~ poor ... dying person ... nice beat you have going there- well- I g2g read and review some more of your brilliant work so ~ JA! ~CrimsonFire
11/29/2001 c1 16Threshie
Wow, very strong emotions. ^^ Good poem, I liked how the rhyme and rhythme went. Heh, the wording didn't sound *that* bad, c'mon, you're being too critical! Sounded good ta me! ^^ Very dramatic.. Keep up the poetry writing! ^~
16ThreshieWow, very strong emotions. ^^ Good poem, I liked how the rhyme and rhythme went. Heh, the wording didn't sound *that* bad, c'mon, you're being too critical! Sounded good ta me! ^^ Very dramatic.. Keep up the poetry writing! ^~
11/28/2001 c1 KaseiTomodatchi
I really liked the rhythmn too(lol, did I spell that right?). If you could just extend you vocabulary a little deeper on some of the last lines then it would match some of the first lines a little better. Sorry if that sounded offensive, gomen nasai...GOMEN NASAI!*cries pitifully* uh...*ahem* yeah, anywayZ...I'll be going now. Gotta luv these sugar highs tho!^.-
I really liked the rhythmn too(lol, did I spell that right?). If you could just extend you vocabulary a little deeper on some of the last lines then it would match some of the first lines a little better. Sorry if that sounded offensive, gomen nasai...GOMEN NASAI!*cries pitifully* uh...*ahem* yeah, anywayZ...I'll be going now. Gotta luv these sugar highs tho!^.-