for From Afar1/2/2002 c1 
73Eibhinn Eonach
lol. aww.. gosh, that's sad, and i knew how that felt for a while, but i don't have to look at my guy from afar! ^^
lol. sorry... right. onto the actual.. review
weee, it was good good gooooddddd...ddd. liek i said before, i'm sure.. but anywyas, still good. lol,
73Eibhinn Eonachlol. aww.. gosh, that's sad, and i knew how that felt for a while, but i don't have to look at my guy from afar! ^^
lol. sorry... right. onto the actual.. review
weee, it was good good gooooddddd...ddd. liek i said before, i'm sure.. but anywyas, still good. lol,
12/23/2001 c1 22EgyptianAngel
Hey Ashley! I can totally relate to the content of your poem, sadly, a lot of us have felt this way at one point or another. Your poem is very well formed and developed. Keep on writing, and it'll take you places. Hang in there girlie ;)
~EgyptianAngel
( Joey's Daya )
22EgyptianAngelHey Ashley! I can totally relate to the content of your poem, sadly, a lot of us have felt this way at one point or another. Your poem is very well formed and developed. Keep on writing, and it'll take you places. Hang in there girlie ;)
~EgyptianAngel
( Joey's Daya )
11/30/2001 c1 11CellophaneSun
Nice. The redundancy really shows the progression of the poem well, and I like how self-contained it is. Hope someday you're able to leave the land of afar and get closer :)
11CellophaneSunNice. The redundancy really shows the progression of the poem well, and I like how self-contained it is. Hope someday you're able to leave the land of afar and get closer :)