for Unfinished Business2/6/2009 c40 
4LupusAries
Are we going to see more chapters of this good story? i really like it. Though i can´t really say it about Cassandra...who is she that she thinks she can walk out of his life and break his heart just to come back when it suits her. And that its best for her daughter is a load of bull´. She just want to have a "reason" to come back... Your have good skills at writing your characters. Hopefully you´ll continue this story.
4LupusAriesAre we going to see more chapters of this good story? i really like it. Though i can´t really say it about Cassandra...who is she that she thinks she can walk out of his life and break his heart just to come back when it suits her. And that its best for her daughter is a load of bull´. She just want to have a "reason" to come back... Your have good skills at writing your characters. Hopefully you´ll continue this story.
6/14/2007 c40 4boredshitless
wow again, you're such a great writer but thats no wonder seeing that you've been writing for over a decade already. i'd really hope to see the ending of this story but seeing how you havent updated in over a year i guess i shouldnt be getting all my hopes up. i find i like this story the best out of the others i've read of yours since theres more chemistry development between the leads, or thats how i see it. keep it up, and i hoping that you'll gain motivation to finish off all your unfinished works
4boredshitlesswow again, you're such a great writer but thats no wonder seeing that you've been writing for over a decade already. i'd really hope to see the ending of this story but seeing how you havent updated in over a year i guess i shouldnt be getting all my hopes up. i find i like this story the best out of the others i've read of yours since theres more chemistry development between the leads, or thats how i see it. keep it up, and i hoping that you'll gain motivation to finish off all your unfinished works
5/22/2007 c40 11Pretty Senshi
It's really good up until this point. I cannot wait till I can find out what Sam does next with Sandra and Robyn.
11Pretty SenshiIt's really good up until this point. I cannot wait till I can find out what Sam does next with Sandra and Robyn.
4/10/2007 c40 1The baava Project
Few typos, but nothing major. Story-wise, it's still as strong as ever.
I do hope that you'll update this again. Someday. No rush. (grins)
There's enough of a minefield just around Cassandra herself that I can't help but wonder how Sam is going to jump.
And I absolutely adore Beth - always have, but in this chapter, she's a treasure!
yours,
baava
1The baava ProjectFew typos, but nothing major. Story-wise, it's still as strong as ever.
I do hope that you'll update this again. Someday. No rush. (grins)
There's enough of a minefield just around Cassandra herself that I can't help but wonder how Sam is going to jump.
And I absolutely adore Beth - always have, but in this chapter, she's a treasure!
yours,
baava
2/2/2007 c40 17Susurrent Threnody
Whatever you do, don't let Sam get back together with Sandra. That is a disaster waiting to combust in a ball of flame and smoke.
17Susurrent ThrenodyWhatever you do, don't let Sam get back together with Sandra. That is a disaster waiting to combust in a ball of flame and smoke.
6/20/2006 c40 Cherise
Sandra is bona fide crazy! Who causes such turmoil, then just saunters back into their life, demanding acceptance! She doesn't deserve a third chance. She made the choice.
Sandra is bona fide crazy! Who causes such turmoil, then just saunters back into their life, demanding acceptance! She doesn't deserve a third chance. She made the choice.
6/17/2006 c40 pinkfairydust
oh my god...uh oh!...
i am in shock!...it is fantastic!just a few things though...robin and robyn? keeps changing and same with jeff and geoff..um..yea thats all! its great otherwise!
oh my god...uh oh!...
i am in shock!...it is fantastic!just a few things though...robin and robyn? keeps changing and same with jeff and geoff..um..yea thats all! its great otherwise!
5/9/2006 c40 nicole
i wish you updated more often cuz everytime you do update, it's been months and i've forgotten everything and i end up having to reread the whole story over and over. please update soon, this is a really good story, and i wish the chapters came faster.
i wish you updated more often cuz everytime you do update, it's been months and i've forgotten everything and i end up having to reread the whole story over and over. please update soon, this is a really good story, and i wish the chapters came faster.
3/17/2006 c40 1Avitaris
Gah! I can't wait for you to continue! Keep up the great work! Lookin' forward to the next chapter!
1AvitarisGah! I can't wait for you to continue! Keep up the great work! Lookin' forward to the next chapter!
2/11/2006 c34 JennySmile
I don't know if this is purposeful or just an oversight, but I believe Robyn's father's name has changed from Jefferson to Geoff. Something you want to fix definitely, because it is very confusing. But I love the story, it's very good.
I don't know if this is purposeful or just an oversight, but I believe Robyn's father's name has changed from Jefferson to Geoff. Something you want to fix definitely, because it is very confusing. But I love the story, it's very good.