for Us4/2/2003 c1 MelodyReiterLee
Nicely done. Great way of showing pictures and expressing yourself. Lotsa of truth too. Good job!
Nicely done. Great way of showing pictures and expressing yourself. Lotsa of truth too. Good job!
3/24/2003 c1 
2AedhgsH
That was so good. It was filled with honesty and truth. My favorite lines were "I'm just like you. I am you. You know exactly how I feel, even if you don't admit it. Won't admit it. You live my life. I live yours" That's is wonderful
2AedhgsHThat was so good. It was filled with honesty and truth. My favorite lines were "I'm just like you. I am you. You know exactly how I feel, even if you don't admit it. Won't admit it. You live my life. I live yours" That's is wonderful
1/25/2003 c1 12Glass Visage
Thanks for reviewing my poem...I think that what you've just written is more common of everyone than they're willing to admit. Also, I think it's very difficult to write poetry in paragraph form, as you have. Pertiful ^^
12Glass VisageThanks for reviewing my poem...I think that what you've just written is more common of everyone than they're willing to admit. Also, I think it's very difficult to write poetry in paragraph form, as you have. Pertiful ^^
12/13/2002 c1 1Sharpe
Poor Thistle...
As someone has already said, good imagery. You pulled me down in to the darkness while I read. Cheers to all the Masked and Light Haters.
1SharpePoor Thistle...
As someone has already said, good imagery. You pulled me down in to the darkness while I read. Cheers to all the Masked and Light Haters.
8/29/2002 c1 Rohali
very cool, the imagery is great and i know exactly how you feel, i really like this piece
very cool, the imagery is great and i know exactly how you feel, i really like this piece
2/7/2002 c1 10Ashley Elora Schaefer
like i stated before you have great potential, how old are you anyway. i'm 13 uh email me lata
10Ashley Elora Schaeferlike i stated before you have great potential, how old are you anyway. i'm 13 uh email me lata
12/12/2001 c1 2The Shadow
Your story is really true, money (when it comes down to it) is just a form of control. And as for tests, I feel the exact same way as you and Shade. I mean really, why do we have to write all we know on paper? When they ask us to do that we all forget anyway when we have to write it down. Tests are too unreliable (anyway, I'm rambling here) Great fic, as true as ever. And I liked the last bit.
2The ShadowYour story is really true, money (when it comes down to it) is just a form of control. And as for tests, I feel the exact same way as you and Shade. I mean really, why do we have to write all we know on paper? When they ask us to do that we all forget anyway when we have to write it down. Tests are too unreliable (anyway, I'm rambling here) Great fic, as true as ever. And I liked the last bit.
12/7/2001 c1 2the shade
you really are good at this. money aint the answer to everything and neither are tests. why should tiks matter? or bits of paper? huh? WHY! *composes himself* sorry about that. wicked bit of writing though, keep goin
2the shadeyou really are good at this. money aint the answer to everything and neither are tests. why should tiks matter? or bits of paper? huh? WHY! *composes himself* sorry about that. wicked bit of writing though, keep goin
12/2/2001 c1 mandy
wow, this was really good.
wow, this was really good.