for AND5/19/2003 c1 
77LadyWillow2
It was very good, and I liked the last line... very good, even though I wasn't greatly impesed with Tori's Strange Little Girls CD. The only complaint I have it the use of symbols and short hand words (w/o instead of without, etc). It makes the poem seem more impersonal and rushed, and kinda like you didn't care about it... but then again, I have a firm aversion to 'chatspeak', which I think makes people seem unintelligent. So yeah, very very good work! You should write more based on Tori characters!
77LadyWillow2It was very good, and I liked the last line... very good, even though I wasn't greatly impesed with Tori's Strange Little Girls CD. The only complaint I have it the use of symbols and short hand words (w/o instead of without, etc). It makes the poem seem more impersonal and rushed, and kinda like you didn't care about it... but then again, I have a firm aversion to 'chatspeak', which I think makes people seem unintelligent. So yeah, very very good work! You should write more based on Tori characters!
7/30/2002 c1 29Katterree Fengari
...hm? What? what happened? I MUST KNOW! what did she do, what does her daughter have to do with it? ...HM? ...fine..don't tell me...
29Katterree Fengari...hm? What? what happened? I MUST KNOW! what did she do, what does her daughter have to do with it? ...HM? ...fine..don't tell me...
12/6/2001 c1 ERica
So sad. But good stuff.
So sad. But good stuff.