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10/28/2005 c1 1Sunflower Sarah
This is SO REFRESHING to see! Most of the stuff on this site is crap. Don't stop writing.
11/25/2004 c1 30Weeba
Very nice. I like the lack of capitals; it lends the poem an air of something-or-other that I can't describe.

However, I'm not sure I like the line "their indifferent LEDs blink @ me", particularly the use of the @ sign in a poem. And what's an LED? You might want to make that clearer, and please get rid of the @!
4/27/2003 c1 2cinder's rose
Like like like. Its got rhythm, but I can't figure out how. A work of art in its own right.

I want to review heat again because it only has 3. Oh well. Props on all your works!
12/11/2001 c1 268Grey Mitten
well i couldnt really imagine that, but it is pretty cool
12/6/2001 c1 Evil Clone-Erica B
Woo-Hoo!

I love this poem. It reminds me of my quiet days!

It's a winner!
12/5/2001 c1 38Erika Lynn
powerful, im off to read more of your poems
12/5/2001 c1 Toireasa
"OOH! Once again, A beautiful poem. Different, yet powerful. Your poetry is quite new, and I'm loving it!

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