for when coyote howls2/25/2005 c1 
16Wing Chant
Wow. That's awesome. I as well, like listening to the noises of the night. Take it, there's really nothing to listen to where I live except the wind, but it's soothing neithertheless. ^^
Awesome work!
loserz. ;)
16Wing ChantWow. That's awesome. I as well, like listening to the noises of the night. Take it, there's really nothing to listen to where I live except the wind, but it's soothing neithertheless. ^^
Awesome work!
loserz. ;)
12/12/2001 c1 6Mathison Kotzwinkle
It changed tenses around the middle, from present to past tense, but other than that it was great. I liked the part in present tense better; perhaps you may want to consider revising it so that the whole poem is written in one tense. (Hey, maybe my Writing teacher HAS taught me something after all. *grin*)
6Mathison KotzwinkleIt changed tenses around the middle, from present to past tense, but other than that it was great. I liked the part in present tense better; perhaps you may want to consider revising it so that the whole poem is written in one tense. (Hey, maybe my Writing teacher HAS taught me something after all. *grin*)