for Serial Killer2/19/2006 c1 SilentRiver
It was good, but I couldn't tell if the story teller was the girl or the serial killer until the end... which maybe you wanted?
It was good, but I couldn't tell if the story teller was the girl or the serial killer until the end... which maybe you wanted?
2/27/2004 c1 
55devilvampgirl
i love this poem... if you think this is your worst poem then you must have some really great poems... i think i'll go read them now!
55devilvampgirli love this poem... if you think this is your worst poem then you must have some really great poems... i think i'll go read them now!
10/12/2003 c1 20Shmoopie
very violent..but it was cool. good reveiw! thats what made me wanna read this.
20Shmoopievery violent..but it was cool. good reveiw! thats what made me wanna read this.
7/16/2003 c1 86Cradlerobber Speedo-kun
I don't think it's a bad poem! I can't say I liked it, persay, but I didn't _not_ like it. It was really well-written, the reason it would ever get flames is that lots of people can't deal with a subject matter so controversial. I didn't like it, but I didn't _not_ like it, as I said before. I can't quite explain it, sorry. But I hope you realize that this isn't a flame.
86Cradlerobber Speedo-kunI don't think it's a bad poem! I can't say I liked it, persay, but I didn't _not_ like it. It was really well-written, the reason it would ever get flames is that lots of people can't deal with a subject matter so controversial. I didn't like it, but I didn't _not_ like it, as I said before. I can't quite explain it, sorry. But I hope you realize that this isn't a flame.
6/9/2003 c1 4Inazuma no Megami
*Reads the bottom of the page* ^^' that was supposed to be the worst? It sounded cool to me ^^ (only [maybe I'm just not used to the style] it sounded a bit...^^' jerky)
4Inazuma no Megami*Reads the bottom of the page* ^^' that was supposed to be the worst? It sounded cool to me ^^ (only [maybe I'm just not used to the style] it sounded a bit...^^' jerky)
12/10/2001 c1 38the laughing ghost
Very shui (as in kwel). I love a good angst poem any day. It's what warms me in these cold winter days
38the laughing ghostVery shui (as in kwel). I love a good angst poem any day. It's what warms me in these cold winter days