for Fragility11/10/2002 c1 
10Dark Side Luke
Wow. I don't normally read poetry (because I never understand it) but this really got to me. It's very moving, emotional, dramatic...I love it. Keep up the good work.
~DSL
10Dark Side LukeWow. I don't normally read poetry (because I never understand it) but this really got to me. It's very moving, emotional, dramatic...I love it. Keep up the good work.
~DSL
11/8/2002 c1 12Cactuskitty
Wow. That was wonderfully written, and I could sadly visualize it all. It discripes depression in a very fragile way and I love it. I almost cried, it was so beautiful. (I never cry, so that is a wonderful compliment) Please continue writting, this was great.
12CactuskittyWow. That was wonderfully written, and I could sadly visualize it all. It discripes depression in a very fragile way and I love it. I almost cried, it was so beautiful. (I never cry, so that is a wonderful compliment) Please continue writting, this was great.
11/8/2002 c1 8Stolz
wow, bravo. The metaphors in this poem are alive and sing. This poem is amazing, whether you take this as the honor it is or not, this poem is on my favorties list.
8Stolzwow, bravo. The metaphors in this poem are alive and sing. This poem is amazing, whether you take this as the honor it is or not, this poem is on my favorties list.
11/8/2002 c1 176DefianceIsMe
Hey i really like this. I love the metaphors and the flow it has. Great job really. It's so sad...
176DefianceIsMeHey i really like this. I love the metaphors and the flow it has. Great job really. It's so sad...
10/28/2002 c1 shienjeru
sry I'd log in but it won't let me^
Anyway, Omg, that's awsome. I really really liked reading that. One day I'll get around to reading more of your work. I'm sure it's as good if not better. ^.^
sry I'd log in but it won't let me^
Anyway, Omg, that's awsome. I really really liked reading that. One day I'll get around to reading more of your work. I'm sure it's as good if not better. ^.^
9/6/2002 c1 6Hypatia
This is really awesome. The emotion, the meaning - it's beautiful. The only thing I noticed is that you did a bit of shifting between present and past tense. This still works through most of it (I don't know if you did it on purpose or not) but in the second paragraph/whatever you call it in a poem it sounds a bit strange. What do you think? But seriously, this is about the best poetry I've ever read. It's on my favorites list.
6HypatiaThis is really awesome. The emotion, the meaning - it's beautiful. The only thing I noticed is that you did a bit of shifting between present and past tense. This still works through most of it (I don't know if you did it on purpose or not) but in the second paragraph/whatever you call it in a poem it sounds a bit strange. What do you think? But seriously, this is about the best poetry I've ever read. It's on my favorites list.
9/1/2002 c1 Lady Meriadoc
this is bittersweet and I love it. It is sad but said with a beautiful way.
this is bittersweet and I love it. It is sad but said with a beautiful way.
8/30/2002 c1 1EloiseMidget
This poem is so beautifully written and it's...I really can't explain it. It's just so fabulous and dazzling...Well done.
1EloiseMidgetThis poem is so beautifully written and it's...I really can't explain it. It's just so fabulous and dazzling...Well done.
8/10/2002 c1 39iustus
I can tell this wasn't written in a day or two, this came from deep inside someone. I congratulate on this poem. It's one of the best I've ever read.
39iustusI can tell this wasn't written in a day or two, this came from deep inside someone. I congratulate on this poem. It's one of the best I've ever read.
8/10/2002 c1 moonlight writer
This is stunning... I love it. Such talent and grace all in a poem.
This is stunning... I love it. Such talent and grace all in a poem.