5/11/2002 c1 3aznchick
WOW. omygosh that is REALLLY good seriuosly REALLLY VERY EXTREMELY good!
~aznchick~
WOW. omygosh that is REALLLY good seriuosly REALLLY VERY EXTREMELY good!
~aznchick~
5/10/2002 c1 141Suicidal Butterfly
Oh. this is very much my freind Susannah. I have a poem about her perfect little mask., I love her to death though
Oh. this is very much my freind Susannah. I have a poem about her perfect little mask., I love her to death though
2/24/2002 c1 93Sidhe
The last line in every verse left a hard reality to be absorbed and accepted, no matter how difficult. I hope you're better now. This is an amazing poem, don't ever stop writing. -Sidhe
The last line in every verse left a hard reality to be absorbed and accepted, no matter how difficult. I hope you're better now. This is an amazing poem, don't ever stop writing. -Sidhe
1/1/2002 c1 5emberinthedark
i would undoubtedly say that the best way to describe this is 'haunting'... your beautiful word choices paint a ghostly picture... wow!
i would undoubtedly say that the best way to describe this is 'haunting'... your beautiful word choices paint a ghostly picture... wow!
12/31/2001 c1 5MeltingSilver
Beautiful and emotional. I can't say anything more...it's awesome, describing and haunting at theh same time.
Beautiful and emotional. I can't say anything more...it's awesome, describing and haunting at theh same time.
12/15/2001 c1 Alex
This poem is so moving. One of the best poems i've read on this website. You really should try writing more poetry!
This poem is so moving. One of the best poems i've read on this website. You really should try writing more poetry!
12/12/2001 c1 4Seigi no Hoshi
Wow... I'm speechless. That was a really well written poem; I can't believe that you haven't been writing in a while. It was very emotional and descriptive, and you said a lot with only a few words. :)
Wow... I'm speechless. That was a really well written poem; I can't believe that you haven't been writing in a while. It was very emotional and descriptive, and you said a lot with only a few words. :)