for Throwback1/20/2005 c1 
12Rocky G
Wow this is an excellent poem. Very descriptive paints a perfect picture. Excellent work. :)
Rocky
12Rocky GWow this is an excellent poem. Very descriptive paints a perfect picture. Excellent work. :)
Rocky
4/22/2003 c1 Lady Rheia
This is a wonderful poem. I love the way it is freestyle with a soft flair to it. This is a poem that really makes you think of the charecters with more humanity.
This is a wonderful poem. I love the way it is freestyle with a soft flair to it. This is a poem that really makes you think of the charecters with more humanity.
2/16/2003 c1 5Leah Claire
I enjoyed that poem. You got it just right-poetic without sounding pompous.
5Leah ClaireI enjoyed that poem. You got it just right-poetic without sounding pompous.
3/16/2002 c1 BurningTyger
I liked this quite a lot - especially how you didn't put in a name, so the reader is free to guess who the boy is. It seemed to fit wonderfully with Mordred, and I loved the perspective.
"a voice that understands seduction
better than lullabyes."
Excellent line! I really ought to check out the poetry category more often than I do. :)
I liked this quite a lot - especially how you didn't put in a name, so the reader is free to guess who the boy is. It seemed to fit wonderfully with Mordred, and I loved the perspective.
"a voice that understands seduction
better than lullabyes."
Excellent line! I really ought to check out the poetry category more often than I do. :)