for December8/29/2005 c1 
70cmetalangel249
This poem made me feel so sad. It was written so well and made me feel this girls pain, her hopelessness. Very well written.
70cmetalangel249This poem made me feel so sad. It was written so well and made me feel this girls pain, her hopelessness. Very well written.
2/1/2004 c1 33charcoal wings
wow great poem, you captured her suffering and angst very well, good job!
33charcoal wingswow great poem, you captured her suffering and angst very well, good job!
7/30/2003 c1 210Kelpylion
You got the girl's pain and despair through very well, and you minced no words in your narration. Very nice...er...terrible...well, you know what I mean. :}
210KelpylionYou got the girl's pain and despair through very well, and you minced no words in your narration. Very nice...er...terrible...well, you know what I mean. :}
5/23/2003 c1 30quietdrama22
so sad... but sometimes dying is better than living... so you managed to show someone that is real (well, I am sure that many people in that position wouldve done the same thing, right?) Anyways, keep writing. : |
30quietdrama22so sad... but sometimes dying is better than living... so you managed to show someone that is real (well, I am sure that many people in that position wouldve done the same thing, right?) Anyways, keep writing. : |
10/31/2002 c1 1Kusabana Ara
Whoa! Thats soo lovely! and deep and sooo angstly! Beautiful job! *bows and then claps*
1Kusabana AraWhoa! Thats soo lovely! and deep and sooo angstly! Beautiful job! *bows and then claps*
10/18/2002 c1 215Carter Stockwell
Holy and Unholy %$#^%$#! Man, this is powerful! Man, this is disturbing! Man, this is greatness!
215Carter StockwellHoly and Unholy %$#^%$#! Man, this is powerful! Man, this is disturbing! Man, this is greatness!
4/28/2002 c1 26Ava Vandora
Appreciating what it's like to go through that I think you did a remarkable job of portraying the brutality and emotions well done im impressed.
26Ava VandoraAppreciating what it's like to go through that I think you did a remarkable job of portraying the brutality and emotions well done im impressed.
12/13/2001 c1 youcannotguesswho
wow, that was so deep and meaningful, depressing and angst filled, i liked it!
wow, that was so deep and meaningful, depressing and angst filled, i liked it!