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for mental note #1 (lust?)

7/5/2006 c1 Musical
Think Ganymedes of Greek mythology. I know the type. Interesting piece.
2/7/2006 c1 51Artemis Obscure
Deeply amusing. Really.
5/12/2003 c1 To-To Kama Mae
Great summary. I love it. I really love how you describe every small, glinting feature and all the emotions. Perhaps you should write one about a guys feelings towards a girl. Overall it's great. *.*
5/6/2002 c1 93Sidhe
Oh yes it is isn't it? I like. ...The review before me was...a mistake or...? -Sidhe
4/30/2002 c1 shaily
added some lines and cleaned it up... it's just a suggestion.

Love

Shaily

Have you ever seen someone in the halls and thought in awe: “He’s gorgeous.”

Not sexually (okay maybe just a little), but simply beautiful.

Almost angelic.

You try not to stare -It’s fascination. I think. Everyday. It’s not a crush- it’s observing a piece of classical Greek artwork.

Tracing the curves of his mischievous marble eyes.

Absorbing his presence with a bestial appetite. Drinking- in his beauty

becoming sensually drunk

time seems to stop for you and everything turns to shades of gray

color emanating from him. Standing out.

he laughs at some joke- you lean forward watching his neck. So delicate like a swan.

Your fingers tingle with the need to feel it beneath your skin.

Pondering- what the taste of his lips,

And the sensation of his tongue searching over your body.

You try to steady your labored breathing and the blood pounding in your head.

(Is this lust?)

thoughts are superimposed with his image.

*Suddenly he’s in your class, two seats behind you.* /take this out

You fear he’s wondering why that guy two seats ahead of him doesn’t answer the teacher right away./take this out

You wonder if anyone knows your secret.

It kills you- the anxiety of hiding.

You catch a glimpse of him from the corner of your eye.

Looks like you’ll have to wait for the next exhibition.

Oh, well...

fantasy is better than the real thing anyway.
12/17/2001 c1 82mikae77
pretty interesting. and it isn't even in normal format. it's poety all the same. but this is romance, no? a guy *make that a HOT guy* I wouldn't know if it's lust or not. never been near one!

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