for Murky Waters, Dusky Skies4/20/2006 c1 amie
I really really like this, and I don't know why.. well I suppose it may have to do with how closely I can tie this with myself... like people I know and circumstances and feelings. Truly tis awesome.
I suppose that's all... I'm not too grande of an author to critique it, just wished to tell you your story's grand.
I really really like this, and I don't know why.. well I suppose it may have to do with how closely I can tie this with myself... like people I know and circumstances and feelings. Truly tis awesome.
I suppose that's all... I'm not too grande of an author to critique it, just wished to tell you your story's grand.
3/13/2004 c1 
21WiredCrazyFrances
Wow. . .I really liked that story... and it was really well written. I especially liked how you put it into two different points of view.
21WiredCrazyFrancesWow. . .I really liked that story... and it was really well written. I especially liked how you put it into two different points of view.
2/1/2004 c1 1Duct-Tape-chan
Wow, this is awesome. I really want to read more! I love your writing style, I really hope you get the second chapter up soon before I explode. ^_^
1Duct-Tape-chanWow, this is awesome. I really want to read more! I love your writing style, I really hope you get the second chapter up soon before I explode. ^_^
2/5/2001 c1 4Arsinuae1
Wow. This is a really powerful story. I enjoyed reading about Sarah, Luke, Indie and Ash, even though I'm wondering if Jakob might have more of a role. Normally with characters such as these-a small group of people as the focal point-each has a specific role in the group. Or not. Depends on how you like your story. Hope to see more of your writing soon -Arsinuae
4Arsinuae1Wow. This is a really powerful story. I enjoyed reading about Sarah, Luke, Indie and Ash, even though I'm wondering if Jakob might have more of a role. Normally with characters such as these-a small group of people as the focal point-each has a specific role in the group. Or not. Depends on how you like your story. Hope to see more of your writing soon -Arsinuae
11/30/2000 c1 ZeRoFallenFive
Excellent! You have exquisite talent, I wish I had talent like that :) I loved this! I think that sometimes Everyone feels a little like Indie and Sarah. Great portrayal of character!
-ZeRo
Excellent! You have exquisite talent, I wish I had talent like that :) I loved this! I think that sometimes Everyone feels a little like Indie and Sarah. Great portrayal of character!
-ZeRo
7/30/2000 c1 D
interesting...it's definately a change from normal things. I can't wait to hear more.
interesting...it's definately a change from normal things. I can't wait to hear more.