Reviews: I want my dad | FictionPress

10/1/2003 c1

217MistrissD
aww thats so sweet, the ending is so perfect

1/9/2003 c1 A Thousand Folded Cranes
That was so beautiful...I loved it! Even thoguh it made me cry, it's one of the best poems written around ff.net, i think

8/20/2002 c1 Smiley- Bear
Wipes tears this is soo sad. Your poem really has a meaning. Write more poetry. You are a good writer!

5/6/2002 c1 Soccer Chicka
Sad...but really good.

I was thinking of writing a songfic bout war in general...maybe i will...BUt this is a really good poem!

5/3/2002 c1 he
who is this!hg,m

4/30/2002 c1

4OmoideKeeper
This is really a good poem, and a good way to touch other people. I'm sure this has happened to many families since the Sept. 11th attack, and I just want you to know that you did a really nice job with this.

4/4/2002 c1

7YoungRL
Very nice. It's sad and touching.

3/31/2002 c1 amberflower
This was amazing. Very sad,but very,very,well written.

3/29/2002 c1

1Sato Aiko
::sniffsniff:: you should write poems more often! ::blowsonapieceoftissue:: oiy! email me sometimes or something like that...

3/15/2002 c1

1Ryo's Chick
*sniff* so sad and sweet. You are very good at writing!

3/12/2002 c1 Jirarudan
APRIL FOOLS!

3/11/2002 c1

4Taichi Princess
Jirarudan! DON'T EVEN! Please, I worked on this poem, and if I see it anywhere else, I will SUE! DON'T DO IT! I don't want anyone else winning prizes for something they didn't do, ESPECIALLY if it was my work!

3/9/2002 c1 Jirarudan
Wow.

I like that story so much that I'll copy it word for word and use it in a contest under my name.

Please don't freak out.

3/5/2002 c1 me once again
i am soorry but i have to saw somtin nice this touched my heart i love this sorry

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