1/11/2008 c1 1Ross-the-BAMF
I like how it seems to be from "The Other Woman's" POV, but it seemed like you bounced back and forth between ryme and no ryme.

Still. I can easlily picture it in my head and it wonderful.

12/26/2001 c1 13Dr. Tamwe
Very simple and brutal. The concision of this poem contrasts to your usual style without breaking from it completely. Nice work.

(identify much? me? nah.)