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3/2/2008 c1 5CreativeSprite
No more injustice

No more crime

Look out world

It’s weenie time!

I laughed so hard I fell off my chair. Captian Weenie, what a name! Fantastic, I love it.
3/22/2006 c1 Zannah Jacobs
Funny! I hooted out loud and was reading bits to my mom, just to kind of explain why I was suddenly going off into a "Bwahahaha! Broccoli smell!" kinda thing.
3/8/2006 c1 4hael nylasse
Lol, that's really funny! It might be better with more characters...I'm more of a reader than a writer though
1/22/2005 c1 2illuminati mage
That was hilarious...especially since I'm writing a superhero story. That made my day...keep up the good work!
2/20/2004 c1 12zennou-sakusha
This wasn't supposed to be a serious story, was it? If not then great job! Sounds like one heck of a parody!
1/27/2001 c1 Genisis
That was one of the best ffs ever!
1/13/2001 c1 NeoSage
Pretty damn good! I liked it. I told some of my associates about it. Keep writing.
8/4/2000 c1 11Nikira
I'm glad you asked that Forsythe. You see "cheez" is just like "cheese" but with a "z", therefore making it lethal to the powers of the Weenie. If the Captain has cheese, he's fine, if he eats cheez, he's dead.
8/4/2000 c1 Forsythe
This was a pretty funny story. BTW, what is cheez? :)

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