for Deficiency3/10/2002 c1 Stardreamer
Another interesting poem, Artsydoll! I love your word selection...the chaotic feeling is very in tune with the subject!
Another interesting poem, Artsydoll! I love your word selection...the chaotic feeling is very in tune with the subject!
1/5/2002 c1 
48Daughter of the Nile
I really like this one, I can totally understand where you are coming from! I really like it, especially the dying, dying, gone part- I dont know why, I just like it. I like the rest too, I hope you do more, I'm going to read some more of yours now.
P.S. Do you do poems about animals?
~Daughter of the Nile~
48Daughter of the NileI really like this one, I can totally understand where you are coming from! I really like it, especially the dying, dying, gone part- I dont know why, I just like it. I like the rest too, I hope you do more, I'm going to read some more of yours now.
P.S. Do you do poems about animals?
~Daughter of the Nile~
12/27/2001 c1 31Cindy Moon
This is great!( happy new year since i didn't review earlier)
this has the sense of no self worth
it's really good!
31Cindy MoonThis is great!( happy new year since i didn't review earlier)
this has the sense of no self worth
it's really good!